I am currently half way through with my essay, and I just realized that I am shifting its focus. My essay is on how the Toy Princess represents industrialization, specifically mechanization. I started out the project with the idea that mechanization destroys creative thinking in the working class, and I found a few good sources for it. But as I researched more, I want to also talk about the middle class’s attitude toward the working class, and how the attitude the citizens have for the Toy Princess in the story reflects that. I don’t know if I can fit both ideas in the essay, or if that would make my essay lose focus. Don’t know what to do! Any suggestions?
I have the same problem. I end up going through three different subject throughout my draft. ThoughI think it is possible to still have a focused essay if the ideas can connect together to make a greater point.
I did the same thing and connected two different subjects. I think that it is hard to do but it gives the essay greater depth.