How are everyone’s essays going? Is anyone planning on rewriting an essay? What are you going to change if you do? I’m not sure yet if I’ll have time, I’m going in to talk to Dara tomorrow I think. If I do a rewrite, it will probably mostly be structural changes and some content stuff.Â
I am not going to rewrite because I feel that I should focus on the other things we need to do and because I think it would be too hard to rewrite one of my essays and so I think it would be too much work to rewrite and it may end up not being much better. Most of my essays had problems of structure but mostly things were too confusing to understand so I think it would be really hard for me to explain things in a way that would be better understood because my thesis’s were always complicated
I just got done revising the research paper. It was pretty epic, but I felt that I had to do it because I was very dissatisfied by the way it turned out last time. I felt that I had some good progress with that essay. Hope everyone is good luck with their papers!